NFS: Difference between revisions

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-Then we have to either move our already-existing directories inside <code>/export</code> or bind-mount them there:
+Then we have to either move our already-existing directories inside <code>/export</code> (using <code>mv</code> from the command line) or bind-mount them there:
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-Having the filesystem ready, we can proceed to configure our NFS server:
+Having the filesystem ready, we can proceed to configure the NFS server itself:
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-This configuration exports all our shares to 2 local IPs; Gentoo's wiki has a great article [https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/NFSv4#Server Gentoo wiki NFSv4 article] that covers typical settings, so we won't repeat them here.
+This configuration exposes all our shares to 2 local IPs; you can find more examples at Gentoo's wiki [https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/NFSv4].
 Other options are available on the [https://search.nixos.org/options?query=nfs NixOS option page] or via the <code>nixos-option</code> command.